My slow transformation

These are pictures from 8th/9th grade, 10th grade, 11th grade and  12th grade. big difference

Beginnings 1

Whatever it was, it blew my mind open with the different scenarios that could be attached to the writting. They could be in love with each other but both of them are married. Their partners both believe that they are out of state on a business trip, in reality both are in a a beautiful hotel suit surrounded by the smell of plumeria. He is in love with her and she is in love with him. She had recently found out she's pregnant with his child. Neither of them can bare the pain of their other family through, they decide to take drugs and jump off the top of the hotel. Holdings hands, looking at the side walk, she counts to three, he felt her smooth hand slip out of his.

Thats the type of story I would assume would be the beginning of beginning 1.